Bones of a good story but some niggly grammar errors
My rating: 2 of 5 stars
This one had all the makings of a good story but I kept getting thrown out of it because of bad grammar editing and typos.
It’s a shame because on paper the story narrative had lots of good elements to it, although I did raise a question about the setting of the incident which kicks it all off and whether it was too soon.
Still, there was only a little bit of angsty dramady and I didn’t feel like this was too much of an insta love romance and the steam level was on the higher and hotter side.